Вопрос только тем, кто очень хорошо знает англ! Остальные, пожалуйста, не отвечайте! От этого эссе зависит моя оценка за полугодие!
Проверьте пожалуйста, правильно ли написано сочинение? Я имею ввиду время, смысл там. Буду очень благодарна если поможете!) В этом сочинении мне нужно рассказать о памятных днях моей семьи!)
"I want to tell you about memorable days in my family.
The first memorably day is wedding anniversary of my parents. They married a
long time. On this day our family dines in the restaurant. Then we walk around
the town, and our parents talk to us different interesting stories about them.
I with my sisters give a present. Usually, we give a family’s photos, cakes, bouquets,
books. They always rejoice, when we congratulate them.

The second memorably day of my family is New Year. Sometimes, our family
invites quests. We celebrate this holiday together. At first, we prepare the
New Year dishes, watching a film “Ironiya sudby”. At 10 p.m. we sit at the
table and speak about next year. Then we spend interesting contests. At 23.55
we prepare to make a wish. At the midnight we make a wish and rejoice the New
Year.

I like to spend holidays with my family together!"