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My hobby is music. Like anyone who enjoys music, I have my favorite band. For me it Skilet. It is a rock band from the city Memfys founded in 1996. At the moment it has 13 albums. The founder of the group is the bass guitarist John Cooper. Why I like this music group? Because I like genre work of its members, like their voice and the pace at which they sing. Also plays a small role or the content of their songs. In my opinion, shall all their songs are full of interesting content, that is nice to listen to. My favorite song of this group Komatoz.

I like rock, heavy metal and gothic metal music. My favorite music band is Within Temtation. 
Band founded in 1996 by vocalist Sharon den Adel and guitarist Robert Westerholt.
 After the release of their first album Enter, the band became prominent in the Dutch underground scene. It was not until 2001 that they became known to the general public, with the single "Ice Queen" from the album Mother Earth, which reached No. 2 on the Dutch charts. Since then, the band won the Conamus Exportprijs four years in a row. Their next albums The Silent Force and The Heart of Everything debuted at No. 1 on the Dutch charts. In 2008, they released a live DVD and CD, Black Symphony, recorded with the Metropole Orchestra. This collection was followed in 2009 with An Acoustic Night at the Theatre.
 I think this music band is briliant.
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